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  • Lagerfeld and Merkel gate

    • Lagerfeld critics the look of Chancellor Merkel, “If she wants, I could give her some advise” The German stylist offered himself for an expert advises about fashion to the Chancellor.
  • But she has no time: “She is too busy.” The German Kaiser of the fashion, Karl Lagerfeld, criticised the look of the Prime Minister Angela Merkel, also offering her some expert advise about fashion.
    • The famous German stylist, who actually lives in Paris, declared to the weekly Focus magazine “Miss Merkel should wear something that could suits her, for her specific size.” He added, making a concrete example “But I’ve heard she didn’t want suggestions.” He criticised that during the visit of the President of the USA, Barack Obama at Berlin, Miss Merkel wore “unfortunately” a pair of “bell extremely bottoms,” the “proportions were wrong, also the pair, and there were too long.” If the Chancellor asks him a suggestion, Lagerfeld would helped her, “but she hasn’t time to come in Paris” and when she visits the President Françoise Holland “she is very busy” and she has not time for fashion.
    • During her 20 years in politics, Miss Merkel has changed her appearance many times, first of all the haircut: however, since she has became Chancellor, her look is always the same and as regards her appearance, she wears always jacket and pants with any kind of colour, including those which are flashy.

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    • Lagerfeld critics the look of Chancellor Merkel, “If she wants, I could give her some advise” The German stylist offered himself for an expert advises about fashion to the Chancellor.
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    • Lagerfeld critics the look of Chancellor Merkel, “If she wants, I could give her some advisce”¶The German stylist offered himself for an expert's advisesce about fashion to the Chancellor.
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    • Lagerfeld critics the look of Chancellor Merkel's look, “If she wants, I could give her some advisce”¶The German stylist offered himself for an expert's advises aboutce on fashion to the Chancellor.
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    • But she has no time: “She is too busy.” The German Kaiser of the fashion, Karl Lagerfeld, criticised the look of the Prime Minister Angela Merkel, also offering her some expert advise about fashion.
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    • The famous German stylist, who actually lives in Paris, declared to the weekly Focus magazine “Miss Merkel should wear something that could suits her, for her specific size.” He added, making a concrete example “But I’ve heard she didn’t want suggestions.” He criticised that during the visit of the President of the USA, Barack Obama at Berlin, Miss Merkel wore “unfortunately” a pair of “bell extremely bottoms,” the “proportions were wrong, also the pair, and there were too long.” If the Chancellor asks him a suggestion, Lagerfeld would helped her, “but she hasn’t time to come in Paris” and when she visits the President Françoise Holland “she is very busy” and she has not time for fashion.
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    • The famous German stylist, who actually lives in Paris, declared to the weekly Focus magazine “Miss Merkel should wear something that could suits her, forsuits her specific size.” He added, making a concrete example “But I’ve heard she didn’t want suggestions.” ¶He criticised that, during the visit of the President of the USA, Barack Obama at Berlin's visit, Miss Merkel wore “unfortunately” wore a pair of “bell extremely bottoms,” the “proportions were wrong, also the pair, and therey were too long.” If the Chancellor would asks him for a suggestion, Lagerfeld would helped her, “but she hasn’tdoesn't have time to come into Paris” and when she visits the President, Françoise Holland, “she is very busy” and she has not time for fashion.
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    • During her 20 years in politics, Miss Merkel has changed her appearance many times, first of all the haircut: however, since she has became Chancellor, her look is always the same and as regards her appearance, she wears always jacket and pants with any kind of colour, including those which are flashy.
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    • During her 20 years in politics, Miss Merkel has changed her appearance many times, first of all the haircut: however, since she has becaome Chancellor, her look is always the same and as regardsing her appearance, she wears alwayalways wears jackets and pants withof any kind of colour, including those which are flashy ones. ¶
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