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  • Trying to write a story

  • Kyle was sitting at his laptop.
    • Legs crossed and closing, his hands occasionally due to the cold Christmas night.
  • It was about time for him to start writing, and he had quite an ambitious project in mind.
  • His son entered the room.
  • ”Johnny, could you get me that pen, please -,” said Kyle, keeping his eyes on the laptop.
    • ”Sure dad.” ”Here you are,” - said Johnny, handing the pen to his dad.
    • ”Dad, May I….,” Johnny tried to ask Johnny.
    • ”English please,” his dad - interrupted .
    • ”Oh, sorry about that, m.
    • May I get this 1 euro coin that you left here on this shelf?.” Johnny knew that he couldn’t take any coins without his father’s consent, even if he knew he could steal them and wouldn’t even realize.
    • ”Sure.” ”I’m glad that you asked this time,” - said his father, who was also happy about his son’s improvement in English in the recent weeks.
    • ”Now please leave me alone since I need some inspiration here and you´’re distracting me ” said Kyle with a serious face.

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