Corrections

HELP TO CORRECT NOW!Uncorrected

Text from Asishi - English

  • Advise

  • Hi.
    • Today I want ask a question you.
    • Do you know any app to improve my writing?
    • I’m better off saying do you have any advise to improve my writing?
    • I’m trying to improve but I think I haven’t improved and it makes me sad .
    • I myself told come here and ask you maybe one of you have comments or ideas that help me.
    • Thanks who corrects my text.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English