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Text from rosmery_po - English

  • A Sucessful friendship

  • Ever since we are children our parents and teachers have always taught about friendship, because it is necessary to get along with people you have close.
  • I think there are many different kind of friendship such as with relatives, neighbors, coworkers, classmates, even thought with pets.
  • Making and keeping friends are the key of all relationship.
  • In the first place, we live in a society, that means we need to talk to people in everywhere at every stage.
  • Another major reason, it is easier to stay in a place with people you are comfortable with.
  • How to make and to keep friends?
  • If you wanted to make up new relationships, you would be open to new experiences like to participate in activities and organizations.
  • Besides, for keeping friends, do not offer advice unless you are asked.
  • People argue that to have good friends is like to have siblings.
  • In fact, there are friends closer than brothers.
  • Of course, building that friendship costs time and efforts, but worthwhile job.
  • First of all, people need emotional support and companionship and a good friend always will be there for you; for instance, if you need advice or to borrow money.
  • Well about to borrow money, there are people who oppose to do that because it is a way to lose a friend.Money is a complicated topic.
  • Furthermore it causes trouble between friends.
  • In my point of view, what would I have done if a friend had asked me some money?
  • I would have given away the money if a friend had needed it.
  • Taking everything into account, we can choose our friends and demonstrate them loyalty and trust.
  • I believe if you are not a good friend, you will not have a good one.
  • You have to take care of them, to respect their opinion and never stop loving them.

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