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    • My Favorite Season

    • 　My favorite season is spring.
    • I like spring because it’s warm and many animals wake up in spring.
    • Also, one semester begins in spring too.
    • There are many activities to do in the spring.
    • For example, we can go on a picnic.
    • And we can play outside too.
    • But sometimes we need to stay home because of yellow dust.
    • Personally, I like going to see flowers.
    • Many flowers -cherry blossom, azalea, forsythia, and more- bloom in spring, so we can see beautiful art of flowers.
    • There are flowers in front of my place, so I always feel good in spring.
    • Wha’ts your favorite season?

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