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  • Yalda’s night

  • Hi everyone.
  • Ok let’s start.
    • Today’s topic I want introduce you another big and lovely Iranian’s ceremony.
  • It’s Yalda’s night.
    • That day really fantastic.
    • That day is the latter day of fall and in belife of Iranian that night is one minute more than other night.
    • They have special traditions for celebrate it.
    • In next section I will be trying talk more about it.

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