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Welcome to my new topic.
- I was studying and told myself come here and write a new topic😅.
- I mean , I have been reading English grammar and I though use it here untill learn it well and utilize it because I think if we don’t use our knowledge. it hasn’t been useful. Be lucky.

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- Welcome to my new topic.
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- I was studying and told myself come here and write a new topic😅.
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- I was studying and told myself to come here and write a new topic😅.
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- I mean , I have been reading English grammar and I though use it here untill learn it well and utilize it because I think if we don’t use our knowledge. it hasn’t been useful. Be lucky.
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- I mean , I have been ~~read~~studying English grammar and I thought to use it here untill I learn it well ~~and~~. I also thought to utilize it because ~~I think~~ if we don’'t use our knowledge. it hasn’'t been ~~useful~~efficiently used. Be lucky.
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- I mean , I have been reading English grammar and I though ~~use~~t about using it here untill I learn it well ~~and~~. I want to utilize it because I think that if we don’'t use our knowledge. then it hasn’'t been useful learning it. Be lucky.
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