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  • Gastrodiplomacy

    • What’s gastrodiplomacy ?
    • Since 2002, gastrodiplomacy is a manner for some countries to use food in order to extend their cultural influence.
    • Governments support restaurants everywhere in the world to make their nation become more popular.
  • What do you think about promoting a country through gastrodiplomacy?
  • I think it’s a smart way to promote a country.
  • Eating is an essential need.
    • Regarding the manner Thailand’s government is promoting its country, it seems to work.
  • Thailand has become the most visited country in Southeast Asia.
  • What’s your favorite foreign dish?
  • My favorite foreign dish is kebab.
  • Do you like the idea of the program connecting refugees and residents through food in neighborhoods?
    • I like this idea because most of the time, the community judges refugees without knowing them.
    • Sharing a national meal with local people could allow these latters to discuss, exchange, and interact.
    • In short, each one could make acquaintance with one’s neighbor, and why not notice we are all human beings with our differences.
    • It could inspire the public to get how it was difficult for these refugees to leave their country, family, habits, culture,...
    • Thanks to all these dissimilarities we could open our mind and refugees could get more aware of local traditions and lifestyles.
    • It could also be an opportunity for local inhabitants to diversify their own food.
  • Is food culture an important element of your country’s identity?
  • What’s the role of food?
  • I think food is an important element of my country’s identity.
  • First of all, food has a biological function.
    • After, food plays a part in constructing the identity of our society.
    • Food allows us to assemble, share, discuss,...
  • But on this planet, people don’t have enough resources to eat properly every day or are dying of starvation.
  • This is unfair.
  • Moreover, it’s revolting to see people wasting food.
  • Thank you very much for correcting my text.
  • Have a nice weekend. Sylviane

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