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Text from thao_ho - English

    • I need advices

    • My Dad was gone because of Covid-19, which makes me really painful.
    • Actually , my Dad and I do not have a great time together when he was alive.
    • My family has broken since I was 8 , then my Dad usually drunks.
    • Therefore, we always agrue with each other.
    • I admit that Im a hard-working person and absolutely an emotional girl , but I can not be gentle with him because he always interrupt me whenever he drunks.
    • I have to go to work and study for about 10-15 hours a day but when I come home he has already drunk and he rarely leave me alone or let me rest.
    • I used to think that if he’s in danger, I will absolutely feel nothing..
    • Nevertheless, that day came and the Covid-19 took my Dad away from me..
    • I swear it was truely hurt and it kind of lost a part of my life.
    • I regret doing nothing much for my Dad when he was alive, Im only 21 that I could not make much money in order to improve our poor life .
    • I used to give him many little gift such as jacket , belt , cakes , ... but for me it was not enough .. and at this moment, I miss him alots, which can even make me insane .
    • I know I must continue to live , but how can I live in peaceful without getting out of that pain in my mind.. whether time could help me accept that hurt in my life..?

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