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Divorce
- A lot of families will fall apart.
- Have you ever thought of how many people get divorced all over the world?
- Indeed, the number of cases of divorce in court has been increasing in the last few decades.
- Some important reasons why people get divorced is related to trust issues, financial issues, and family issues.
- The first reason why people get divorced has to do with trust issues.
- Spouses get bored of each other a little while after marriage.
- They usually starts fooling around from time to time which makes them really upset about their relationship.
- Furthermore, jealousy is very common problem in a serious relationship.
- People get really jealous when they find their partner being too friendly with their friends.
- Having an affair is the last straw before getting divorced in most relationships.
- In brief, trust issues is a common reason why people get divorced.
- The second reason why people get divorced is related to family issues.
- Married people abuse alcohol and get back home very late.
- This can lead to a dreadful argument in front of their children.
- Some husbands are very aggressive with their wives.
- This, in its turn, creates conflicts between parents and other close family members.
- Many families are struggling financially.
- Indeed, not having enough money to suport their families is beleaved to be a very important reason why people get divorced.
- Statistics showed that 50% of people get divorced because of financial problems.
- Further, having many children needs a lot of finances.
- This has a heavy weight on parents shoulders.
- Thus, financial issues can destroy a family.
- In conclusion, there are many reasons why people get divorced.
- Studies found that half of people who are recently married get divorsed a few years after.
- I think people should choose the person who they would get married to very wisely.
- el_yaehya
November 2021
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