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  • Divorce

  • A lot of families will fall apart.
  • Have you ever thought of how many people get divorced  all over the world?
  • Indeed, the number of cases of divorce in court has been increasing in the last few decades.
  • Some important reasons why people get divorced is related to trust issues, financial issues, and family issues.
  • The first reason why people get divorced has to do with trust issues.
  • Spouses get bored of each other a little while after marriage.
    • They usually starts fooling around from time to time which makes them really upset about their relationship.
    • Furthermore, jealousy is very common problem in a serious relationship.
  • People get really jealous when they find their partner being too friendly with their friends.
  • Having an affair is the last straw before getting divorced in most relationships.
  • In brief, trust issues is a common reason why people get divorced.
  • The second reason why people get divorced is related to family issues.
  • Married people abuse alcohol and get back home very late.
  • This can lead to a dreadful argument in front of their children.
  • Some husbands are very aggressive with their wives.
  • This, in its turn, creates conflicts between parents and other close family members.
  • Many families are struggling financially.
    • Indeed, not having enough money to suport their families is beleaved to be a very important reason why people get divorced.
    • Statistics showed that 50% of people get divorced because of financial problems.
  • Further, having many children needs a lot of finances.
    • This has a heavy weight on parents shoulders.
  • Thus, financial issues can destroy a family.
  • In conclusion, there are many reasons why people get divorced.
  • Studies found that half of people who are recently married get divorsed a few years after.
    • I think people should choose the person who they would get married to very wisely.

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