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Text from SoundsOfPoetry - English

    • A letter to the current brazilian president

    • I saw a puddle emerging, it’s not from a pouring rain.
  • It’s from youth’s eyes watering all the ground with sadness.
    • In the top of their lungs they scream: How can I live with a minimum wage?
  • Meritocracy, they said.
  • Zombies working at UBER as modern slaves.
  • Meritocracy, they said.
  • Graduated people with no formal jobs as modern clowns.
  • Meritocracy, they said.
  • The fuel prices rising immensely like truckers’ strike fury.
  • Meritocracy, they said.
    • Why you don’t call it shitcracy?
  • (I don’t know what kind of text I wrote. Is it a poem?
  • Could you help me?)

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English