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Text from Kittynazyy - English

  • The old house

    • Today the topic is about our old house.
  • When I was a child, my parents and I lived in an old house.
    • We shared the house with a young couple.
  • They lived in a room at the right corner of the house.
    • One day I heard we must leave the house, because a man was going to buy the house and renovating it.
    • In short, we moved to a new apartmant.
  • There was no fence around it so it was not a safe place for living.
    • Once, when we were outside somebody broke into our apartmant and stole a big cabinet.
    • But we were so lucky because that was a cheap an old one.

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