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    • About my family

  • Hello, I want to tell you about my family.
    • My parent’s family are mother, father, two brothers and me. I married.
    • My family after marriage are husband and daughter. She is 11.
    • We have two cats - black and white and a grey chinchilla:) All our animals are friendly to each other.
    • We have wonderful mountains on the Far East.
    • We love to ski there in winter, to ride a bike in summer.
    • Sometimes go to outside to get some berries, enjoy by sea, althought it is windy and coldy often even in summer.
    • Honestly, I’d like to move to in a warmer place, for example, Russia central part :)

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