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Text from 55elena_jv - English

    • Feminine Footwears

  • On this card is the most popular kind of footwears nowadays.
  • The trend is that sneakers displace shoes, those feminine and beautiful, but terribly uncomfortable shoes.
    • I’m not just notice it by looking other people, but I changed myself.
    • In the days of my early youth I used to wear high heel shoes everywhere and disrespect women who don’t do it.
    • Now I hardly ever wear them.
    • Actually I have only one pair of shoes and they are dusting in the closet.
    • Sneakers it’s comfortable and can look also very nice even with a dress.
    • Now I rather commiserate those women who forced to wear high heel shoes in everyday life.
  • I am not a follower of feminism, but I believe that women deserve comfort and healthy legs.
  • And there are lots of other ways to get men’s attention.

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