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  • My last travel experience

    • Aproximatly one month ago I went to Medellin which is one of the bigest cities in Colombia.
    • I decided to travel there due to people always have spoken so well about that city; they say that everything in there is nice!
    • Medellin citizens are so kind and polite, its wether is perfect, tipical food is very delicious and there are a bunch of places in which you can enjoy a lot, its nightcluub for instance.
    • You can visit any of those places and enjoy a lot, you’ll never be tire of visting every place in Medellin.
    • I was in there for 5 day, I thing it was too short because I couldn’t go to some places I wanted to visit. the first day we hosted in my girlfrind’s sister house, she was so kind to us!
    • She alway was worry about me confort, she made me feel as I had at home.
    • Second day we went to Medellin downtown, there you can find a plenty of stuff.
    • First we climbed El cerro de nutivara which is a wonderful place to enjoy, you can take picture on the top of there and observe from the viewpoint the landscape.

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    • I decided to travel there due to people always have spoken so well about that city; they say that everything in there is nice!
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    • I decided to travel there due tobecause people have always have spoken so well about that city; they say that everything in there is nice!
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    • Medellin citizens are so kind and polite, its wether is perfect, tipical food is very delicious and there are a bunch of places in which you can enjoy a lot, its nightcluub for instance.
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    • Medellin citizens are so kind and polite, itsthe weather is perfect, tipicalhe food is very delicious and there are a bunchis a number of places in which you can enjoy a lot, its nightcluubs for instancexample.
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    • I was in there for 5 day, I thing it was too short because I couldn’t go to some places I wanted to visit. the first day we hosted in my girlfrind’s sister house, she was so kind to us!
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    • I was in there for 5 days, I thingk it was too short because I couldn’t go to some places I wanted to visit. tThe first day we were hosted inby my girlfriend’'s sister house,in her house and she was so kind to us!
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    • First we climbed El cerro de nutivara which is a wonderful place to enjoy, you can take picture on the top of there and observe from the viewpoint the landscape.
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    • First we climbed El cerro de nutivara which is a wonderful place to enjoy, you can take pictures on the top of there and observe fromwatch at the viewpoint of the landscape.
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