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    • I want to apply for a job

    • I have been trying to aply for a job in Accedo during the las four years.
    • Accedo is a company from USA which sells products like cellphones, data plans, wireless services and Internet for your home.
    • I would like to work for Accedo given the fact that I like everything in there; Its work eviroment, its benefits and the experience that I could have because of the opportunities Accedo ofers.
    • Because of that I have been practicing English often, almost every day since to get the job your inglish level must be above the 80 percent, as well as your skills in typing, you must be so fast, your speed must be 40 words per minute at least.

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    • Accedo is a company from USA which sells products like cellphones, data plans, wireless services and Internet for your home.
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    • Accedo is a company from USA whichthe USA that sells products like cellphones, data plans, wireless services, and Internet for your home.
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    • I would like to work for Accedo given the fact that I like everything in there; Its work eviroment, its benefits and the experience that I could have because of the opportunities Accedo ofers.
      투표하세요!
    • I would like to work for Accedo given the fact that I like everything in there; I: its work environment, its benefits , and the experience that I could have because of the opportunities Accedo offers.
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    • Because of that I have been practicing English often, almost every day since to get the job your inglish level must be above the 80 percent, as well as your skills in typing, you must be so fast, your speed must be 40 words per minute at least.
      투표하세요!
    • Because of that, I have been practicing English often, almost every day, since to get the job, your iEnglish level must be above the 80 percent, as well asmust your skills in typing,; you must be so fast, that your speed must be at least 40 words per minute at least. .
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