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    • Hi :-) I'm Noémie, I'm belgian and I'm 16.
    • I'd like to learn English cause I'm completely in love with this language!
    • But I do/ I'm doing a lot of faults :/ I've 2 hours of english by week in the school, It's little..
    • So I try to learn alone with twitter, instagram, music, movie in English, my idoles (one direction and Justin bieber don't judge me pls).
    • In few years I'd like to live in London!
    • This place is so incredible, I visited it in February :-) But for live in England it's so much better if I speak perfectly English.

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    • Hi :-) I'm Noémie, I'm belgian and I'm 16.
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    • Hi :-)! I'm Noemie. I'm Belgian and I'm 16. OR Hi! I'm Noéemie,. I'm bBelgian and I'm 16 years old. OR Hi. I'm Noemi. I'm a 16-year old Belgian teenager. OR Hi. I'm Noemi. I am Belgian and I'm 16 years of age.
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    • But I do/ I'm doing a lot of faults :/ I've 2 hours of english by week in the school, It's little..
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    • But I do/ I'm doing a lot of faults :/ I've 2However, I make a lot of mistakes. I only have 2 hours of English lesson in the school per week. It's not enough. OR However, i make plenty of errors. I only got two hours of eEnglish by week in the school, It's little.class at school per week. It's not enough. OR However, I always commit plenty of mistakes. I just got 2 hours of English lesson at school every week.
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    • So I try to learn alone with twitter, instagram, music, movie in English, my idoles (one direction and Justin bieber don't judge me pls).
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    • So, I try to learn alone witthrough tTwitter, iInstagram, music, movie watching English, films and viewing my idoles (one direction andJustin Bieber and the band called One Direction on the television. Please don't judge me. OR So, I try to learn alone though Twitter, Instagram, music, English movies, from my idols Justin bBieber and One Direction. Please don't judge me pls).
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    • This place is so incredible, I visited it in February :-) But for live in England it's so much better if I speak perfectly English.
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    • Thisat place is so incredible,. I visited it in February :-) But forbut to live in England it'swould be so much better if I speak perfectly Englishcould speak English fluently. OR That place is so incredible. I visited it in February but to live in England would be so much better if I could able to speak English perfectly.
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