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Text from Mahd_sad - English

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  • Three years ago,my family and I were on vacation in Isfahan.
  • We had booked two rooms at the hotel.
    • One of them was for my parents and the other room for me and my sister.
    • The first night my sister and I were scared.
    • We were frightened due to we thought an alien was behind the window of the room.my sister wanted to go to our parent’s room since I thought they were asleep ,I didn’t let her go.
  • We slept on a single bed all night.
    • next day,we took a taxi and went to the botanical garden.
  • It was fascinating.
  • It has different plants and flowers.
    • And it had an old horse,we rode it and took pictures.also it had a some museum like entomology museum, the aquarium and ....
    • After that we came back to hotle and tried new dish for an other country .
    • It was disgusting and I changed my order and ate Isfahan’s food.

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