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Text from julian_and - English

  • My grandmother

  • My grandmother My grandmother has been one of the lovest relatives I have, she has been on my side all the time, since I was I little baby.
  • She is the mother of my mother, so that my mother love her a lot.
  • My mother is the oldest child my grandmother give birth.
  • My mother has take care from her mother and sibilings almost all the life, she worked hard to bring food for them, even she bought a house, so in that way they hadn’t pay for the rent again.
  • My grandmother has a big heart, she want to herp people all the time, she is very kind everytime.
  • Today my mother is so sad, since my grandmother get sick, she sufer from some diseas since severals years ago.
  • Last time she fainted so that we had to take her to the hospital urgently, Doctor said she had weird things in the blood, so that produced a serious problem in her head, now she can’t walk neither talk, we have to help her to do everything.

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    • My grandmother My grandmother has been one of the lovest relatives I have, she has been on my side all the time, since I was I little baby.
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    • My mother has take care from her mother and sibilings almost all the life, she worked hard to bring food for them, even she bought a house, so in that way they hadn’t pay for the rent again.
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    • Last time she fainted so that we had to take her to the hospital urgently, Doctor said she had weird things in the blood, so that produced a serious problem in her head, now she can’t walk neither talk, we have to help her to do everything.
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