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The first thing I would start with is buying my own apartment in the city center.
It would be a two-bedroom apartment with high ceilings and floor-to-ceiling windows.
There would be a terrace.
My big dream is to live in the center.
I love Moscow very much.
I love it for its eternal movement, for chaos, for energy.
I love her for the fact that she does not accept everyone and not everyone can live here.
And I want to leave my house and immediately find myself in the very center of events.
I want to see my most beautiful city from my windows.

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- The first thing I would start with is buying my own apartment in the city center.
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- It would be a two-bedroom apartment with high ceilings and floor-to-ceiling windows.
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- There would be a terrace.
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- My big dream is to live in the center.
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- I love Moscow very much.
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- I love it for its eternal movement, for chaos, for energy.
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- I love her for the fact that she does not accept everyone and not everyone can live here.
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- And I want to leave my house and immediately find myself in the very center of events.
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- I want to see my most beautiful city from my windows.
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