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- Last week was soo terrible.
- My friends come to me and bring some food.
- We made bbq and just hang out.
- We keep smiling and playing games to night.
- Then, started raining.
- We were shocked because the day was so hot and full of sunny.
- All of them went to there’s own house and I feel lonely.
- I was just sitting on my coach when someone start knocking on my door.

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- My friends come to me and bring some food.
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- My friends coame to my house and br~~ing~~ought some food.
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- We made bbq and just hang out.
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- We keep smiling and playing games to night.
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- We ~~keep smiling and~~were playing games toas the night fell.
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- Then, started raining.
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- Then, it started raining.
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- We were shocked because the day was so hot and full of sunny.
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- We were shocked, because it~~he day~~ was soa hot ~~and full of sunny~~, sunny day / the sun had been shining all day, and it had been hot.
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- All of them went to there’s own house and I feel lonely.
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- All ~~of them~~my friends went back to the~~re’s own house and I fe~~ir homes, and I suddenly felt lonely.
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- I was just sitting on my coach when someone start knocking on my door.
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