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    • Dear professor Dr Phil chilibeck,

    • I am a M.Sc. graduated of physical education from Islamic Azad University Science and Research.
    • I got my B.Sc. in the same major at University of Tehran No.1 ranked Iranian university.
    • My GPA M.Sc. is 17.83 out of 20.
    • I am pleased to say that I have visited your homepage and have got some information about your Interest areas such as ”women’s health and bone health” issues.
    • Given my work experience with youth girls and women for 11 years, I am encouraged to apply for PHD Graduate Program of Saskatchewan University, It will be indeed an honor for me to be associated with your team either as a research assistant or teaching assistant.
    • Here you can download my attached Resume to get more information about me and my job experience.
  • I would appreciate your kind reply about the possibility of further communication. Best regards,

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