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  • My grandmother

    • My grandmother has been one of the lovest relatives I have, she has been on my side all the time, since I was I little baby.
    • She is the mother of my mother, so that my mother love her a lot.
    • My mother is the oldest child my grandmother give birth.
    • My mother has take care from her mother and sibilings almost all the life, she worked hard to bring food for them, even she bought a house, so in that way they hadn’t pay for the rent again.
    • My grandmother has a big heart, she want to herp people all the time, she is very kind everytime.
    • Today my mother is so sad, since my grandmother get sick, she sufer from some diseas since severals years ago.
    • Last time she fainted so that we had to take her to the hospital urgently, Doctor said she had weird things in the blood, so that produced a serious problem in her head, now she can’t walk neither talk, we have to help her to do everything.

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    • My grandmother has been one of the lovest relatives I have, she has been on my side all the time, since I was I little baby.
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    • My grandmother has been one of the lovhappiest relatives I have,; she has been onby my side all the time, since I was Ia little baby.
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    • My mother has take care from her mother and sibilings almost all the life, she worked hard to bring food for them, even she bought a house, so in that way they hadn’t pay for the rent again.
      투표하세요!
    • My mother has taken care ofrom her mother and sibilings almost all ther life,; she worked hard to bring food for them, even she boughtbuying a house, so in that way they hadn’t payid for the rent again.
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    • Today my mother is so sad, since my grandmother get sick, she sufer from some diseas since severals years ago.
      투표하세요!
    • Today my mother is so sad, since my grandmother geot sick, she. She has suffered from some diseas sincees for severals years ago.
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    • Last time she fainted so that we had to take her to the hospital urgently, Doctor said she had weird things in the blood, so that produced a serious problem in her head, now she can’t walk neither talk, we have to help her to do everything.
      투표하세요!
    • Last time she fainted so that, we had to take her to the hospital urgently, D. The doctor said she had weird things in ther blood, so that produced a serious problem in her head, n. Now she can’t walk neitheor talk, and we have to help her to dowith everything.
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