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Text from julian_and - English

  • My free day

    • Today I wake up early, then I had a lot of time to do many things. first I had breakfast; I ate eggs with bread and orange juice.
    • After eating my breakfast I went to the gym as usually I do, it is very important to me since excersicing is healtful and help to improve your strengh, moreover it relaxes a lot, so you can have a cool day.
    • In afternoon a came back to my house and had lunch at 2 pm, after finishing eating I immidialy take a shawer and get ready to go out to down town, I had to go there because I had to find out some staff.
    • I went to the flower shop to buy some presents for my girfriend; I bought I teddy bear which is so lovely, I know she is gonnna be facinated whith it!
    • Then I called her to drink soda, it was delicious and se like it a lot.
    • So I took her to her house on my motor bike, we arrived there and stayed some minutes as her mom invited me to drink coffee.
  • It was a nice day!

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  • Sentence 1
    • Today I wake up early, then I had a lot of time to do many things. first I had breakfast; I ate eggs with bread and orange juice.
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    • Today I waoke up early, then. I had a lot of time to do many things. fFirst, I had breakfast;. I ate eggs with bread and orange juice.
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  • Sentence 2
    • After eating my breakfast I went to the gym as usually I do, it is very important to me since excersicing is healtful and help to improve your strengh, moreover it relaxes a lot, so you can have a cool day.
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    • After eating my breakfast I went to the gym as usually I do, i. It is very important to me since excersiccising is healthful and helps to improve your strengh, mth. Moreover, it relaxes a lot, so you can have a cool day.
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  • Sentence 3
    • In afternoon a came back to my house and had lunch at 2 pm, after finishing eating I immidialy take a shawer and get ready to go out to down town, I had to go there because I had to find out some staff.
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    • In the afternoon a, I came back to my house and had lunch at 2 pm, a. After finishing eating I immiediately takeook a shaower and get ready to go out to down town,. I had to go there because I had to find out some stauff.
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    • I went to the flower shop to buy some presents for my girfriend; I bought I teddy bear which is so lovely, I know she is gonnna be facinated whith it!
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    • I went to the flower shop to buy some presents for my girlfriend; . I bought Ia teddy bear which is so lovely,. I know she is gonnna be fascinated whith it!
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    • So I took her to her house on my motor bike, we arrived there and stayed some minutes as her mom invited me to drink coffee.
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    • So I tookI brought her to her house on my motor bike, w. We arrived there and stayed somefor a few minutes as her mom invited me to drink coffee.
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