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    • World Economic Forum aims to approach education for increasing entrepreneurship worldwide through holding round tables with heads of government and ministers of employment and education to communicate important questions and build cross-ministry support.
    • Such a union will help to create a new policy and environment in order to take concrete measurable actions of promoting entrepreneurial education.
    • They view this as a priority because they believe that entrepreneurship is a key competence for life and that it helps turn ideas into actions.
    • Which in the long run creates working places and helps to develop local and national economies.
    • They believe that schools and universities are central in the upbringing of entrepreneurial skills and attitudes of young people.
    • World Economic Forum suggests using social media and local communities to raise awareness of entrepreneurship, make education available and create networks and partnerships among participants and interested people.
    • They are going to train teachers in the field of entrepreneurship so they can bring knowledge to the masses.
    • They are planning to do so among all levels of the education system including primary, secondary, and vocational.

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    • World Economic Forum aims to approach education for increasing entrepreneurship worldwide through holding round tables with heads of government and ministers of employment and education to communicate important questions and build cross-ministry support.
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    • World Economic Forum claims to approachhat education for increasing entrepreneurship worldwide through holdis important in increasing the awareness on worldwide entrepreneurship. Organizing round table meetings with the heads of the government andtogether with the ministers of employment and education to communicate important questions and build cross-ministry supportwill be an opportunity to address important questions and to establish cooperation among different govermental ministries.
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    • Such a union will help to create a new policy and environment in order to take concrete measurable actions of promoting entrepreneurial education.
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    • Such a uncooperation will help to create a new policyies and to estabish an environment in order tof takeing concrete measurable actions ofn promoting entrepreneurial education.
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    • They view this as a priority because they believe that entrepreneurship is a key competence for life and that it helps turn ideas into actions.
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    • They view this asis must be a priority because they believe that entrepreneurship is a keyone of the keys in achieving competence forin life and that it helps it always turns ideas into actions.
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    • They believe that schools and universities are central in the upbringing of entrepreneurial skills and attitudes of young people.
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    • TheyWord Economic Forum also believes that schools and universities are central in the upbringing of entrepreneurial skills and attitudes of young peopleeducation of the young people particularlly in developing their entrepreneurial skills.
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    • World Economic Forum suggests using social media and local communities to raise awareness of entrepreneurship, make education available and create networks and partnerships among participants and interested people.
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    • World Economic Forum suggests that using social media and reaching out to local communities will help to raise awareness ofn entrepreneurship, make education availaccessible and create networks and partnerships among participants and interested people.
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