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    • The water was pollution after

    • The fishermen who are eating dolphin are poisoning themselves，but they are also poisoning the people that they are selling it to.
    • In the Japanese ,they called it Minamata disease as mercury poisoning.The most serious health risk of these high levels of mercury is to pregnant women, when their baby were growing up ,they can’t take care by themselves.
  • However, their bodies are different than normal people.
    • Some of them can’t hold their head up, can’t see and hear, speak and hard to eat、shake hands，It is difficult for them to move a single step.
    • In the fact , they look just like can not do anything that they want.

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    • The fishermen who are eating dolphin are poisoning themselves，but they are also poisoning the people that they are selling it to.
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    • The fishermen who are eating dolphin are poisoning themselves，, but they are also poisoning the people thatwho they are selling it to.
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    • In the Japanese ,they called it Minamata disease as mercury poisoning.The most serious health risk of these high levels of mercury is to pregnant women, when their baby were growing up ,they can’t take care by themselves.
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    • In the Japanese ,language, they called it Minamata disease for what is known as mercury poisoning. The most serious health risk of these high levels of mercury is to pregnant women, —when their baby wereis growing up , they can’t take care of the baby by themselves.
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    • Some of them can’t hold their head up, can’t see and hear, speak and hard to eat、shake hands，It is difficult for them to move a single step.
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    • Some of them can’'t hold their head up, can’t see and hear, have difficulty speaking and hard to eat、eating, have shakeing hands，. It is difficult for them to move a single step.
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