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Text from TIMDN - English

  • Leaving rural area

    • Many young people are leaving rural areas to splendid cities.
    • They are desperate for good jobs and get a lot of things that are more valuable.
    • However, most of them just are unskilled workers so they just get jobs with low salaries and must stay in the slums.
  • In a bad condition, they are easy to come down with anything.
    • Living in the big cities, everything is more expensive than what is in the rural area.
    • Moreover, they are always taken advantage of by employers, even though, they can recognize this and they also ruminated a lot but they have no other way except turning a blind eye.
    • They need the job because their families are leaning on their meager income for living.

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