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  • Elderly Drivers

    • According to some people, elderly drivers should be required to reapply for their driving licenses because with age comes diminished vision, hearing, and reaction time.
    • How do you feel about this issue?
  • Explain what you think should be done and why.
  • According to Brazilian law, every driver should update their status every five years.
  • Hence, they must take an eyesight exam and an evaluation with a doctor to assess their physical condition.
    • A healthy young person would not find any difficult to get through this process.
    • Nevertheless, elderlies may find some barriers to get their license renewed.
    • In most cases, cognitive deficits are responsible for the lack of attention on the traffic owing to their age.
    • I believe denying their access to a document that is their right is not the solution, but we can implement specific rules for their traffic.
    • And request an update in a shorter period.
    • In a nutshell, we can not take draconian measures on this case, but it is everyone’s responsibility to take care of life.

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