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    • CLIMATE CHANGE

    • Climate change has been increasing with forest fires day by day.
    • People with bring about this endanger the lives of both animals and plants.
    • As regards the effects of this, they don’t realize if animals and plants can’t sustain their life, people will be eradicated.
    • All animals want is to live a peaceful but some people don’t allow them.
    • First of all, one of the most crucial effect of climate change is that some animals have been affected negatively.
    • People who disrupt the nature don’t understand that animals are the most important for people’s lives.
    • To exemplify, bees are in danger of extinction due to climate change.
    • If bees cannot exist in the future, the human species is in danger of extinction, meaning to end of the world.
    • Other essential effect of climate change is that people are obliged to live without animals, which is not possible.
    • Animals are badly affected by human caused forest fires.
    • This problem is becoming a widespread issue in the world.
    • If the proper solutions are known and applied well, overcoming the problem will become easier.
    • For instance, if people get educated properly, they learn nature love, thereby reducing in danger of extinction of animals.
    • Taking everything into account, animals is the most crucial thing in our life.
    • Climate change leads to the extinction of animals.
    • If people learn to prevent the nature, both animals and humans lead their lives properly.
    • If only people could protect nature beforehand, now both animals and humans would not be in danger of extinction.

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