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  • REAL LIFE DATING AND ONLINE DATING

    • People has been utilizing too much social media with the increase of the outbreak for a few years.
    • Social media affects our love relationship.
    • With the invention of social media, there emerges some disagreement as to whether this invention favorable.
    • Most people don’t like online dating because there is no face to face interaction ,which is the most vital things for relationships.
    • Although online dating and real life dating are both types of relationships, they differ from each other in terms of sincerity, communication, the possibility of fakes.
    • First of all, real life dating has been maintaining for decades.
    • The reason why people like real life dating is far more sincerity than online dating.
    • Unlike real life, people who you meet on social media can be lying a lot of aspects to you such as gender, characteristic features.
  • In addition, the main advantage of real life dating is face to face communication.
    • Love cannot be sustained properly without face to face communication.
  • All they want is to be in physical interaction with each other.
    • On the contrary to real life dating, online dating has been going on for a few years.
    • People generally don’t like online dating because they would like to be physical interaction between each other.
    • Moreover, people who meet thanks to social media are more likely to be fake, which creates a ignorance society.
  • On the other hand, online dating has great advantages as well.
    • For instance, people with less money can sustain love affair easily contrary to real life dating.
    • By way of conclusion, these types of dating differs from each other in many ways.
    • It is a known most people prioritize real life dating rather than online dating because there is physical interaction in real life dating.
    • Unlike real life, people may be fake and insincerity in online.
    • Yet, online dating has been increasing with the development of technology and other factors.

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