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Tourism has been declining with the increase of the outbreak worldwide.

Countries that earn a lot of money thanks to tourism have faced economic crisis.

Tourism has great advantages as well as some disadvantages.

The main advantage of tourism is that it could be a source of income which is the most important some countries while the essential disadvantage is that it can be a source of problems if it is not well-managed, which leads to massive problems in terms of income.

First of all, tourism is absolutely necessary all countries in terms of earning money.

With the increase of the epidemic, governments who take care of tourism began to lose almost all their money.

In some countries, tourists also learn their tradition and culture as well as making money, thereby increasing their cultural diversity, which creates a modern society.

Countries both increase their cultural diversity and earn money thanks to tourism.

On the other hand, tourism can be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.

For instance, tourists want to take care of themselves all the time.

If a government give too much care tourists, the government start to forget its own people, which brings about rebellion among the society.

As regards earning money, while governments earn much more money by virtue of tourism, they lose everything because of a sole mistake such as racism.

Taking everything into account, tourism has some pros and cons.

Thanks to tourism, governments exhibit their cultural diversity and traditions.

In addition, it earns far more money to countries, especially developed countries.

If it is not well-managed, it leads to a source of problems.

I think benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks because countries that are interested in tourism both earn much more money and exhibit their culture and tradition.