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Text from Sylviane346 - English

  • My Favorite Sport

  • A few weeks ago, we built a new barn right nearby my house.
  • We also built a climbing wall in this building.
  • This wall is about seven meters high.
  • You guessed it: Rock climbing is my favorite sport.
  • I discovered it when I was in high school.
  • I really wanted to do this sport when I was younger but it wasn’t possible.
  • Afterward, I studied and became a primary school teacher. I got married.
  • I have brought up two wonderful boys who are almost grown-ups.
  • Then, I decided to join a climbing club.
  • I learned climbing and got much better at it.
  • In short, I’m spending the summer growing some fruits and vegetables, while walking, climbing, and trying to improve my language skills, without forgetting to take care of my lovely family.
  • Isn’t it what we call happiness? I think it is.
  • Thank you very much for reading and correcting this very small part of my life.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English