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  • Healthy Lifestyle

    • It may sound boring and trivially, but firstly you should take under control your diet: reduce amount of sugar and fast-food.
  • You should try to eat more vegetables and fruit.
    • Because your health and mood are depend very much on what you eat and drink.
    • Also you should do more physical activity: start jogging for example or just do some exercise in the morning.
    • If you are fit you are energetic and confident.
    • And also you should rearrange you sleep pattern: go to bed and wake-up at one time and don’t take a long nap during the day.
    • It would help you to be more active during the day and teach you how to organize your time.
    • Last but not least, you should reduce your time with social media, don’t waste it on such useless thing.
    • It would be better to learn something new and interesting.
    • Maybe find a new hobby or just start to read a book that you always want to read… Try to be more curious about world around you!

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