Corrections

Text from ShirleyLin - English

    • how were they killed the dolphin

    • They just wait till the dolphins come by the boats then put these long poles in the water, which have a flange on the bottom and they just bang on these poles with hammers and they create a wall of sound which frightens the dolphins.
    • There were several hundred dolphins being driven ashore,and they were all running for their lives, running from this wall of sound . by the time they get to the lagoon, they are totally freaked out.
    • They seal it ,then they go home…

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Title
  • Sentence 1
    • They just wait till the dolphins come by the boats then put these long poles in the water, which have a flange on the bottom and they just bang on these poles with hammers and they create a wall of sound which frightens the dolphins.
      Vote now!
    • They just wait untill the dolphins come by the boats then put these long poles in the water, which have a flange on the bottom, and they just bang on these poles with hammers and they create a wall of sound which frightens the dolphins.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
    • There were several hundred dolphins being driven ashore,and they were all running for their lives, running from this wall of sound . by the time they get to the lagoon, they are totally freaked out.
      Vote now!
    • There were several hundred dolphins being driven ashore, and they were all running for their lives, running from this wall of sound . bBy the time they get to the lagoon, they are totally freaked out.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2
  • Sentence 3