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    • A funny experience a had

    • Last night I was spending time with my girlfriend; she calls Camila, she is a really beautiful girl, she is just 18 years old which have 5 months ago.
    • I asked her to go to the cinema since we haven’t spend tieme together since 10 day ago, so I went my girlfriend’s house to bring her to the cimena, which is 30 minutes from my location. this place is in a mall which is located in Dosquebradas, a neihghborh city of Pereira.
    • Then we arrived about 7 pm but we had to wait a lot of time because the customer service agent told us that the movie would start at 9 pm, so we had 2 hours free.
    • I thought about eating some delicious food and walk around the mall mindwhile.
    • We also play pinball and crasch cars. it was so exiting!
    • Finilly, we whach the movie and went home

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    • Last night I was spending time with my girlfriend; she calls Camila, she is a really beautiful girl, she is just 18 years old which have 5 months ago.
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    • Last night I was spending time with my girlfriend; she's callsed Camila, and she is a really beautiful girl, she is just 18 years old which have 5 who turned 18 five months ago.
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    • I asked her to go to the cinema since we haven’t spend tieme together since 10 day ago, so I went my girlfriend’s house to bring her to the cimena, which is 30 minutes from my location. this place is in a mall which is located in Dosquebradas, a neihghborh city of Pereira.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • I asked her to go to the cinema sSince we haven’dn't speend tieme toge each other since 10 day ago, so I went my girlfriend’s house to brings, I asked her to go to the cinema. I went to her house and took her to the cimenunema, which is 30 minutes from my location. this place is in a mall which is located in Dosquebradas, a neihghborh cplace. The cinema is in a mall in Dosquebradas, which is in the vicinity of Pereira.
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    • Then we arrived about 7 pm but we had to wait a lot of time because the customer service agent told us that the movie would start at 9 pm, so we had 2 hours free.
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    • Then wWe arrived about 7 pm but we had to wait a lot of time because the customer servicetwo hours because, as a ticket agent told us that, the movie would not start at 9 pm, so we had 2 hours freeuntil 9 pm.
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