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  • Problem Solution Essay (Overpopulation of urban areas)

    • OVERPOPULATION OF URBAN AREAS People who live in rural areas has been immigrating to urban areas for decades because of unemployment.
  • They can’t earn enough money in rural areas because states don’t care too much about farmers.
    • In addition, this situation creates some problems in urban areas.
    • The main problem is that unemployment begin to increase in urban areas because of immigration.
  • Furthermore, it comes to the point of extinction in some professions which are one of the most necessary such as farmer.
  • If the proper solutions are known and applied well, overcoming the problem will become easier.
  • First of all, one of the most obvious solution is that states should care people who live in rural areas in terms of job opportunities.Otherwise, they will continue to immigrate in rural areas because of finding a job in the future,which emerges some harmful problems in a society such as unemployment and overpopulation.
  • States should care both to maintain important occupations and to prevent overpopulation in rural areas and thus states take a step ahead for the future of their countries.
  • In addition to unemployment, overpopulation of urban areas leads to decrease of their living standards and therefore people start to fight with each other for the opportunity of a better life.
  • The solution of this problem is that states should increase living standards of people who live in rural areas.They would like to do whatever they want.
  • If states provide these people with the necessary things, they won’t immigrate to rural areas as well.
  • Taking everything into account, overpopulation of urban areas has some crucial problems for societies such as unemployment and extinction of some professions.
  • If states take care of people who live in rural areas, these problems eradicate.
  • I think people shouldn’t migrate to urban areas because they are the most important people in all human life;therefore,they should support their areas and live there.

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    • OVERPOPULATION OF URBAN AREAS People who live in rural areas has been immigrating to urban areas for decades because of unemployment.
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    • First of all, one of the most obvious solution is that states should care people who live in rural areas in terms of job opportunities.Otherwise, they will continue to immigrate in rural areas because of finding a job in the future,which emerges some harmful problems in a society such as unemployment and overpopulation.
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    • States should care both to maintain important occupations and to prevent overpopulation in rural areas and thus states take a step ahead for the future of their countries.
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    • In addition to unemployment, overpopulation of urban areas leads to decrease of their living standards and therefore people start to fight with each other for the opportunity of a better life.
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    • The solution of this problem is that states should increase living standards of people who live in rural areas.They would like to do whatever they want.
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    • Taking everything into account, overpopulation of urban areas has some crucial problems for societies such as unemployment and extinction of some professions.
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    • I think people shouldn’t migrate to urban areas because they are the most important people in all human life;therefore,they should support their areas and live there.
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