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My sentences.
- I remember my cousin came over all the time to our home.
- Do you can pick me up from work?
- My cousin is six months pregnant and she is exicited to give birth to beautiful baby.
I am so happy to write here in this link to improve my language.
I think to inorder to improve my language.
I should talk to my friends,listening, reading and writting.
I need more times to improve my language.
I need to earn more money to buy a new phone.

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- I remember my cousin came over all the time to our home.
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- I remember my cousin caused to come over all the time ~~to our home~~.
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Sentence 2
- Do you can pick me up from work?
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- ~~Do you can~~ could you pick me up from work?
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- My cousin is six months pregnant and she is exicited to give birth to beautiful baby.
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- My cousin is six months pregnant and she is exicited to ~~give~~be giving birth to a beautiful baby.
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- I am so happy to write here in this link to improve my language.
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- I think to inorder to improve my language.
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Sentence 6
- I should talk to my friends,listening, reading and writting.
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Sentence 7
- I need more times to improve my language.
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Sentence 8
- I need to earn more money to buy a new phone.
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