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Should kids learn about finance?
Hello.
I think yes and it’s highly important because if they learn finance well they can improve economic and learn it is perfect for them social life and private life.
Thanks to anyone who corrects my text.

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- I think yes and it’s highly important because if they learn finance well they can improve economic and learn it is perfect for them social life and private life.
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