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My new life in Belgium
- This year i started living in Bruxelles, now my new life is fast, because I began working in a restaurant to pay the rent.
- In September i will study confectionery and bakery, i hope to learn how to make great pies and macarons

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- This year i started living in Bruxelles, now my new life is fast, because I began working in a restaurant to pay the rent.
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- In September i will study confectionery and bakery, i hope to learn how to make great pies and macarons
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