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Today
Hi guys.
- Today we have a family party and we have a lot of guests.
- Our guests will come in evening.
- We are readying chicken, Salad, jelly, rice etc. Today I’m so busy.
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- Today
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- Hi guys.
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- Today we have a family party and we have a lot of guests.
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- Today we are haveing a family party and ware haveing a lot of guests.
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- Today we have a family party and we have a lots of guests.
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- Our guests will come in evening.
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- Our guests will come in the evening.
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- Our guests will ~~come in evening~~be coming at sundown.
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Sentence 4
- We are readying chicken, Salad, jelly, rice etc. Today I’m so busy.
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- We are readying chicken, Ssalad, jelly, rice etc. Today I’m so busy.
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- ~~We are readying c~~Chicken, Salad, jelly, rice etc~~. Today~~ will be abundant.¶
  I’m so busy today.
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- Thanks to anyone who corrects my text.
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