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  • Essay about solar energy

  • The lecture and reading are about the importance of solar energy and why they think that this new resource must be implemented.
  • Both the author and lecturer agree with a few reasons why this should be this way.
  • First of all, the author maintained that one reason why solar energy improves the world is that it can decrease the fear we had of run out of fossil fuels due to their slow renewal, as well as the human overconsumption of its resources.
  • In addition to it, the lecturer claims that the energy produced is renewable and increases the lifespan of the sun.
  • Secondly, the reading argues that these types of resources are no pollutants and increases the life of Earth, whereas fossil fuels produce great amounts of pollutants that hurt the environment.
  • The lecturer also adds that these have multi-use functions.
  • Finally, in the text is mentioned that not only they are environment-friendly and renewable but also they are not expensive at all and their maintenance is made every thirty years so that you can be unworried about your finances.
  • Besides, the lecturer points out that many people have bought so many panels that they start companies that sell these and make good wealth.
  • To summarize, both of them agree with the healthy benefit of switch to renewable solar energy to improve the cities, individuals, and the planet.

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    • The lecture and reading are about the importance of solar energy and why they think that this new resource must be implemented.
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    • First of all, the author maintained that one reason why solar energy improves the world is that it can decrease the fear we had of run out of fossil fuels due to their slow renewal, as well as the human overconsumption of its resources.
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    • Secondly, the reading argues that these types of resources are no pollutants and increases the life of Earth, whereas fossil fuels produce great amounts of pollutants that hurt the environment.
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    • Finally, in the text is mentioned that not only they are environment-friendly and renewable but also they are not expensive at all and their maintenance is made every thirty years so that you can be unworried about your finances.
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    • Besides, the lecturer points out that many people have bought so many panels that they start companies that sell these and make good wealth.
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    • To summarize, both of them agree with the healthy benefit of switch to renewable solar energy to improve the cities, individuals, and the planet.
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