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- I want to be your friend
Hello. How are you?
- I want to have a friend.
- We have friendship?

YanaLsAugust 2013100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- I want to be your friend
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- I w~~ant to be your~~ould like to make up some new friends.
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Sentence 1
- Hello. How are you?
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Sentence 2
- I want to have a friend.
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- I ~~want to have a~~have just arrived in Paris for [a holiday] and would like to make up some new friends.
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Sentence 3
- We have friendship?
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- ~~We have friendship?~~It would be so great if you could meet up somehow for a drink at the 'PolyglotClub' night out on Thursday.
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- ~~We have~~Could we develop a friendship?
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