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    • My memories about playing in video games.

    • Well, I didn’t play video games for a long time but I still remember good time when I and my friends were struggling in the game FIFA tournament.It was cool !
    • Everyone of us has choose some teams and we are eagerly wished to win every own match.And sometimes our emotions were over coming and it was very noisy like at the stadium when football fans sick for their team.And it wasn’t easy to cooperate with console and some guys had problem in it.My friends prefered to have a beer during the matches but not for me.And they lost their focusing with every drunken beer battle 🤭.
    • And after there were starting to cheat but for me .I have tried to play honestly.
    • And what I want to say : I have noticed that we could spend for hours playing and it wasn’t good at all .In fact you need to know a limit time for play because after it’s going to be vision problem as the eyes irritation with headache.So everybody should be careful knowing a limit playing with video games!

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    • Well, I didn’t play video games for a long time but I still remember good time when I and my friends were struggling in the game FIFA tournament.It was cool !
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    • Well, I didn’t play video games for a long time but I still remember good times when I and my friends and I were struggling in the game FIFA tournament.It was cool !
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    • Well, I didn’t play video games for a long time but I still remember the good times when I and my friends and I were struggling in the game 'FIFA tournament'.It was cool fun!
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    • Well, I didhaven’t played video games for a long time, but I still remember good times when I and my friends were struggling inthrough the game FIFA tournament. It was cool !
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    • Everyone of us has choose some teams and we are eagerly wished to win every own match.And sometimes our emotions were over coming and it was very noisy like at the stadium when football fans sick for their team.And it wasn’t easy to cooperate with console and some guys had problem in it.My friends prefered to have a beer during the matches but not for me.And they lost their focusing with every drunken beer battle 🤭.
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    • Everyone of us hasd to choose some teams and we are eagerly wished to win every own match.And s Sometimes our emotions wereould over cominge us and it was very noisy like at the stadium when football fans sickroot for their team.And i It wasn’t easy to cooperate with the console and some guy. Some of us had a problem in it.with them. My friends preferred to have a beer during the matches but not for me.And t They lost their focusing with every drunken beer battle 🤭.
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    • Everyach one of us hasd to choose some teams and we are eagerly wishhoped to win every own match.And sSometimes our emotions were over coming and it was very noisy like at thewe got so overwhelmed by our emotion that it got as noisy as a stadium when football fans sickcheer for
      their team.And iIt wasn’'t easy to cooperate withe console and some of the guys had problem in iwith that. My friends preferred to have a beer during the matches but not for me.And tI did not.They lost their focus ing with every drunken beer
      battle 🤭.
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    • And what I want to say : I have noticed that we could spend for hours playing and it wasn’t good at all .In fact you need to know a limit time for play because after it’s going to be vision problem as the eyes irritation with headache.So everybody should be careful knowing a limit playing with video games!
      Vote now!
    • And wWhat I want to say :was I have noticed that we could spend for hours playing and it wasn’t good at all .In fact you need to know ato limit the time forto play because after it’s going to bward we will have vision problems as the eyes get irritation withed and headaches can happen.So everybody should be careful knowing atheir limit playing with video games!
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    • And what I want to say : I have noticed that we could spend for hours playing and it wasn’t good at all .In fact you need to know a limit time for plIn restrospect, I realize that we spent hours playing and it wasn’t good at all .Too much screen time may because after it’s going to be vision problem as thes due to eyes irritation withand headache.Sos.Therefore, everybody should be careful knowing aestablish a healthy time limit for playing with video games!
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