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Text from hanna13 - English

  • Practice 1

    • When I was taught swimming for the first time, I was really scared and worried. because I had a memory that I almost fell in the water.
    • It happened in the swimming pool and there was a big water slide.
    • I enjoyed the slide by myself, but it was faster than I expected.
    • I can’t control the speed of the slide and eventually, I fell in the water and it took a lot of effort to get out of the water.
    • It gave me afraid of water.
    • So, I didn’t believe I can float on water until I formally had a swimming class.
    • But after I knew I can float on water, I’m no longer afraid.
    • Nowadays, I miss swimming.

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