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  • It claims that young people are manipulated as many purchases are dawn on them.
  • There is a barrage of aesthetic ads aimed at them: no sooner they find themselves under a spell.
  • That is allegedly intended to make them feel better about their life and self.
  • It argues that concerns about young people’s lack of judgment are overstated and total exaggeration.
  • However, they view the diversity and frequent advertisements as a practice for the youth’s critical thinking.
  • Even more, they thrust them into making cognitively sensible decisions.

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