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    • How do you learn language ? on my side I watch and listen news article from bbc.com.
    • It's an amazing site where you can discover the currently affaires of all country of the world.
    • Besides, i also read books in english, for exemple in this moment, i read harry potter first volume.
    • But in former time i didn't it and i've have lost many years.

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    • It's an amazing site where you can discover the currently affaires of all country of the world.
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    • It's an amazing site where you can discoverfollow the currently affaires of all the country ofies in the world.
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    • It' is an amazing site where you can discover thefind out about currently affaires of allcovering every country ofin the world.
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    • Besides, i also read books in english, for exemple in this moment, i read harry potter first volume.
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    • Besides, iI also read books in ewritten in English, f. For exeample in this moment, i read harry potter first volume, right now I am reading the first volume of Harry Potter.
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    • Besides, iI also read books in eEnglish, for exemple in this moment, i read harry potter first volume.. I am currently reading the first volume of "Harry Potter."
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    • Besides that, iI also read books in eEnglish, for exeample inat thise moment, i read h I am reading Harry pPotter first vVolume 1.
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    • But in former time i didn't it and i've have lost many years.
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    • But in former time i didn't it and i've have lost many yearsthe past, I didn't read books in English. Because of that, I have lost much of what I learned.
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    • But in former time i didn't it and i've have lost many yearsPreviously I have not done this and feel like I have wasted a lot of time.
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    • But in former time ihowever, in the past I didn't ido that and i've so I have lost many years.a lot of time
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