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Text from alika_anwa - English

  • letter of motivation for student permit

  • I believe in the importance of being prepared not only to train bodies but also to see beyond of whats is palpable on each student to help them develop individual abilities, nurture creativity and artistic development by providing warm, positive environment to promote growth.
  • Therefore, I decided to also take a “Positive Psychology” course last year to then integrate the aquired knowledge to classes as dance Intructor.
  • I decided to expand my knowledge to another áreas that are crucial to handle in order to grow on the field of dance and sport.
  • The program I applied for admission at Holland College is “Sport & Recreation Management” I’m passionate about working in comunity I also love sports and this program offers a broad range of courses during two years that will help me to fullfil my opportunity areas as are: programming, facility management, athletic administration, sport event tourism, marketing, public relations, entrepreneurship, leadership, and program design.
  • As seen before those are courses more on the administration side field which are really important for me to become profficient at as my goal is to develope capabilities to in the future be able to manage my own Arts Sport and Recreation Centre (sport, dance and fitness).
  • I trust I will be able to integrate these learned essencial factors, no less important, to the field of dance and sport.

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  • Sentence 1
    • I believe in the importance of being prepared not only to train bodies but also to see beyond of whats is palpable on each student to help them develop individual abilities, nurture creativity and artistic development by providing warm, positive environment to promote growth.
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  • Sentence 2
    • Therefore, I decided to also take a “Positive Psychology” course last year to then integrate the aquired knowledge to classes as dance Intructor.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2
  • Sentence 3
    • I decided to expand my knowledge to another áreas that are crucial to handle in order to grow on the field of dance and sport.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3
  • Sentence 4
    • The program I applied for admission at Holland College is “Sport & Recreation Management” I’m passionate about working in comunity I also love sports and this program offers a broad range of courses during two years that will help me to fullfil my opportunity areas as are: programming, facility management, athletic administration, sport event tourism, marketing, public relations, entrepreneurship, leadership, and program design.
      Vote now!
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  • Sentence 5
    • As seen before those are courses more on the administration side field which are really important for me to become profficient at as my goal is to develope capabilities to in the future be able to manage my own Arts Sport and Recreation Centre (sport, dance and fitness).
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
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