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  • Formal letter to officer pt3

  • I understand my obligations as an international student and after I finished this course, I will return to Argentina to keep working at my company, which my father will be taking care of for the time I will be in Canada, but this time with the new knowledge acquired, this way giving my company a chance to expand to web design and development, software development.
  • Furthermore, I have a strong credit history in Argentina that I have constructed through the years, which has helped me this time to be qualified for a loan, and after this course is over, I will be applying for a mortgage to buy a house in Argentina.

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    • I understand my obligations as an international student and after I finished this course, I will return to Argentina to keep working at my company, which my father will be taking care of for the time I will be in Canada, but this time with the new knowledge acquired, this way giving my company a chance to expand to web design and development, software development.
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    • Furthermore, I have a strong credit history in Argentina that I have constructed through the years, which has helped me this time to be qualified for a loan, and after this course is over, I will be applying for a mortgage to buy a house in Argentina.
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