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  • Formal letter to officer pt2

  • On the other hand, I chose Canada for the following reasons: 1.
  • Canada is worldwide known for the quality of education and it is recognized as a high level of education different countries. 2.
  • I like English language; I attended to an English course for a year and a half and I am seeking to improve this skill, no better place like Canada. 3.
  • In my opinion, the price offered by this College is reasonable and affordable for my personal income, whereas countries like U.S.A., Germany or the U.K. are not. 4.
  • I have read about Canadian culture, I know they are kind, respectful, disciplined and highly educated people, values I would like to adopt and learn. 5.
  • Being close to my family and 2 dogs is very important, Canada is closer than other countries in Europe so I can visit them frequently.

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    • Canada is worldwide known for the quality of education and it is recognized as a high level of education different countries. 2.
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    • I like English language; I attended to an English course for a year and a half and I am seeking to improve this skill, no better place like Canada. 3.
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    • In my opinion, the price offered by this College is reasonable and affordable for my personal income, whereas countries like U.S.A., Germany or the U.K. are not. 4.
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    • I have read about Canadian culture, I know they are kind, respectful, disciplined and highly educated people, values I would like to adopt and learn. 5.
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    • Being close to my family and 2 dogs is very important, Canada is closer than other countries in Europe so I can visit them frequently.
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