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Text from blopez - English

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    • I am a person who is deeply in love with computers and technology since I was a teenager.
  • I worked for a year as a bilingual agent at a technology company (2015), I made friends there who worked as engineers and technicians, developing software and games.
    • My break time I spent watching them work and asking them how they develop webs and software.
    • About two years ago, in 2019, I had the opportunity to found my company (I attached the company registration letter to this document where you can also see my personal income) where we install, program and repair garage doors, garage door openers, cameras and everything related to it.
  • I love this work, I like the way companies like Liftmaster develop their software with passion, introducing technology like MyQ to a simple thing such as a garage door opener, making life easier and practical.
  • My company Tech industries and work has given me the chance to buy my first new car which is now an essential tool for my business, and the opportunity to travel as a tourist to Chile and Argentina in January 2020.

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    • I worked for a year as a bilingual agent at a technology company (2015), I made friends there who worked as engineers and technicians, developing software and games.
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    • About two years ago, in 2019, I had the opportunity to found my company (I attached the company registration letter to this document where you can also see my personal income) where we install, program and repair garage doors, garage door openers, cameras and everything related to it.
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    • About two years ago, in 2019, I had the opportunity to found my own company (I attached the company registration letter to this document where you can also see my personal income) where we install, program and repair garage doors, garage door openers, cameras and everything related to it.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4
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    • I love this work, I like the way companies like Liftmaster develop their software with passion, introducing technology like MyQ to a simple thing such as a garage door opener, making life easier and practical.
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    • My company Tech industries and work has given me the chance to buy my first new car which is now an essential tool for my business, and the opportunity to travel as a tourist to Chile and Argentina in January 2020.
      Vote now!
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